Episodes

Saturday Jan 20, 2024
Ep. 290: Coptic Bound & Unfinished Novel(s)
Saturday Jan 20, 2024
Saturday Jan 20, 2024
Bookmaking
The first book of the year 2024 is a B6-sized coptic-bound 100-page blank notebook with a nice endpaper, red paper cover, and a cup of cocoa which I thought was coffee, but it came off of a bag of cookies from Miyazaki (Miyazac).
I can’t believe I started it last year. It’s been sitting on my workbench for at least two months. I finally finished it as part of my New Year’s Resolution(s)tm
Speaking of NYR(s)tm, one of them is to read more real books. I’m currently plowing through Joyce’s Ulysses (again; I read it in college, too.) and Marcel Proust’s Within a Budding Grove (Book two of his seven book In Search of Lost Time). I finished the first book, Swann’s Way, last year.
Another NYR(s)tm is to give you a podcast more regularly; that is to say, more frequently. Realistically, I’m hoping that means every two weeks. Now, in order to have something for you to listen to on this podcast every two weeks about books I make and fiction I write I’ll need to make books and write fiction.
See what I did there? If I make more books and write more fiction, I’ll have something for you every two weeks.
Fiction
I finished Heart of September! Oh, perhaps you remember last year when I posted that I was still working on it? Last November? Well, I finished it. This year. In January. It is complete.
With our heroes going there separate ways tremendously changed by their experience in the Democratic Republic of the Congo:
• Our hero (who, by the way, is never named) is back in Madison, WI in high school;
• Sakombi is off to France to live with his sister and avoid being murdered by a warlord;
• Amelia is also heading to France to recuperate and recover her former self in a monastery.
However, in looking through my folder of novels cleverly named Novels on my computer, I opened Molly Bright a novel about a kidnapping in Miyazaki (see above about cookies) and redemption in Osaka.
To my utter horror a novel I thought I finished Two Years Ago was – you can see this coming – Unfinished! Another one! Now, yes, I’m working on it.
You can expect to see more of Molly in future episodes. I hope you’re looking forward to it.
An Observation on Real Life, if You would indulge me.
January 1, 2024 at 4:10 pm the Noto Peninsula here in Japan (near Kanazawa) had a terrific earthquake. The Noto Peninsula is about two hours by car north of here. Yes, we felt the quake. And it was one of the scariest earthquakes I’ve ever been in.
It lasted longer than most, it shook harder than most. Cars rocked back and forth; buildings swayed dangerously. It devastated a couple of towns in the Noto area. It killed about 200 people.
Survivors are dealing with lack of water, heat, and the destruction of their homes. As roads are blocked, helicopters are constantly in the sky carrying personnel and supplies in and injured out. One woman was helicoptered out and gave birth the next day. One 90-year-old woman was found alive after being buried in her house for four days.
It was a bad time, but things are looking up. Lives are recovering, but it will take a long time, maybe years, for people to get their homes back. We’re doing what we can (donating food and money).
Please, the world needs people helping each other.

Thursday Nov 09, 2023
Ep. 289: Cardboard & How I Start a Novel
Thursday Nov 09, 2023
Thursday Nov 09, 2023
Bookbinding
I discovered cardboard. Not originally, but in
my stack of leftovers and the myriad boxes that my local grocery store piles up after receiving shipments of everything from drinks to bananas. More importantly, I’ve started to use them in my bookbinding. Yea! Free supplies!
Last month I made two French link stitch blank notebooks wherein I used cardboard strips to strength the covers. The covers are usually paper folded over to match the size of the book. Flexible but not suitable for what I want to do with the books: write on them while sitting with them on my lap.
This month I made the cover completely cardboard. An A6-size blank notebook with 140 pages.With two colors of thread: green and blue. The front has symbols for the box it came in: no water, no sharp objects, and be careful? hold it in your hands?
This might be used in a foreign language study milieu rather than the red brocade one I made last month. (Visible below)
Ficition
Still! Still working on Heart of September. Will this cauldron of confusion never end? However, it is progressing. Slowly but moving forward. Maybe toward the end. Unfortunately, I have already thought of a companion piece, a novel whose main character is Amelia, one of the main characters in Heart of September. Whether this novel comes to fruition or not is questionable. I should concentrate on finishing my current work in progress.
Speaking of coming up with stories, I am attracted to the story of a novel in several ways. The most common, for me, is to envision a character and try to find a situation that fits the character. For example: once I saw in my imagination a Japanese artist wandering around Spain looking at art. I put him in 17th century Spain, where he meets Cervantes and has an adventure with two body guards and a disgraced nun. The novel, Giapan, uses Don Quixote in several ways: plot, characters, Cervantes, and Cervantes’ style of tangents.
Another way a story slaps me across the face is by using dialog. I hear, again in my imagination, a conversation between two or three people and have to find a place where they could be. I had an entire dialog between a man and a robot once. I decided the man would be a blimp pilot and he was spying on his girlfriend but the blimp was controlled by a robot; a robot with an attitude. The novel, A Year Without Days, evolved into a conspiracy of religious scammers and how the man and his girlfriend had to stop them from bombing places in Tokyo.

Sunday Oct 08, 2023
Ep. 288: Fast Change
Sunday Oct 08, 2023
Sunday Oct 08, 2023
Bookbinding
My first year in Japan I was surprised at how fast the seasons changed. One day it’s summer and Boom! the next day it’s fall with a drastic fall (pun?) in temperature. Over the decades I’ve gotten used to it. But this year of record high temperatures? September 30 it was about 33˚ (96˚) with humidity in the high 50s. October 2? About 20˚ (68˚) with the humidity in the mid-50s.
Which meant working in my work space was tolerable. And I got two books cased in.
The first book, an A6 100-page blank notebook, found me practicing the French Link Stitch after a long time of not using it. Five signatures of five folios each were stitched onto a brocade-like thick paper that was folded over. I added a chopped up ticket to a music performance here in town, keeping the location, time, and seat assignment. I don’t remember the exact concert but feel like it was probably a chorus group or two.
I stitched this book twice. The first time it was too loose. I also made a couple of mistakes inserting the thread into its proper place. I took it apart, glued in some cardboard to make the covers stiffer (so I can hold it in my lap), and re-sewed it. Much better, I think.
It is destined to be my notebook for learning a foreign language; foreign to me, native to native speakers.
The second book is a B6 100-page blank notebook but with the thread doubled up for a thicker and tighter stitch.
Again with five signatures of five folios each. I used a link stitch on four stations and the French Link Stitch on one, near the bottom, for an artistic flair.
I covered it with a used envelope from a local university and added cardboard to make the cover stronger and stiffer. This book is destined to be a art/doodle/sketch notebook as it opens quite flat and is of a reasonable size.
I have a third book on my workbench. It will be 140 pages, A6, blank notebook using a French Link Stitch (which for some reason I insist on capitalizing), with an experimental cardboard cover. Hopefully.
Fiction
Still working on Heart of September, which I hoped to finish in September, but it had other plans. Re-reading sections I find not just typos and confusion but instances, sentences, and dialogs that hinder or slow down the plot, the action, or the emotion. I need to fix these before sliding on to the next chapter, paragraph, or sentence.
For instance, one of the main characters (A French drug smuggler who calls himself different names depending on who he’s talking to – Tristram, Joseph – but his main nom de pseudonym is Kurtz. Kurt Kurtz), is driving a car.
An innocent act anywhere, including in the Democratic Republic of the Congo. Except to get to the city (Goma) where the main action takes place, he flew. Where’d he get the car? I had to devise a scene or dialog about him getting a car. One that fits five people and their luggage. And that he doesn’t mind abandoning when the going gets tough.

Saturday Sep 09, 2023
Ep. 287: Hot
Saturday Sep 09, 2023
Saturday Sep 09, 2023
Bookbinding
Nado. Nothing. Zip. Why? A perfectly good reason why.
My bookbinding studio doesn’t have air conditioning and like most of the planet, Kanazawa is hot. Hotter than some other places but cooler than a few (like Texas, which is on fire).
Rather than sit and sweat a bucket load in the first five or six minutes – which would dampen the paper and make it ew ugly with sweat stains — I’ve turned to reading and writing more. In an air conditioned room in my house or the local library.
Fiction
First, I’ve been editing one-fifth of my Calvado Pentalogy, Calvado, in hopes of making it available on Apple Books soon. Within this year. Just in time for Christmas shopping! I hope. I’m also going to edit the other four-fifths to make the entire pentalogy available for your reading pleasure within this, maybe, decade.
In Calvado, Calvado, the female protagonist, has a lucrative job as a fashion model but is also a second-year medical student.
Mack is a delinquent and singer who believes he is followed by Death. All who care for him seem to die. Therefore, he avoids any attachment to anyone. But he meets Calvado.
The Calvado Pentalogy follows Calvado as she moves through time and space. She’s in Venice (twice) in the present (in The Venetian Slime Woman) and in the 1400s (in The Idiot Runs). She’s in Istanbul both in the present and the past (in The Priests of Hiroshima). And she’s in Gutenberg Iowa in the present when a typesetter falls in love with her even though she’s several decades younger than him (in Tristram’s Printer).
Second, I’ve been writing and rewriting Heart of September in hopes of finishing it soon. Like this year. Although the end is fast approaching. Not the novel, the year. The end of the year is fast approaching. I’ve juggled, added, deleted, and severely edited chapters to make the whole thing fit together much better.
I’ve added atmosphere and details, caused more of the Congo to appear, and raised the importance of certain characters (the snake lady, for example).
Plus I’ve renamed it again back to Heart of September as there are so many references to Heart of Darkness I had to make sure you all understood I know there are references to Heart of Darkness.
I’ve also been writing the final few chapters of a novel I finished some time ago but needs to be improved called Molly Bright. This novel is about a woman who is kidnapped. Three unlikely people decided to save her. The unlikely people are:
- a buyer for a major housewares company; her name is Molly Bright.
- a Ivy League drop out who has spent the last year begging for food in India
- a dancer.
Also involved are a university couple whose daughter was kidnapped, a former hitman for the Mafia who moved to Japan to run a cheap ramen shop, and, of course, the two (formerly six, but four were killed) kidnappers.

Tuesday Aug 15, 2023
Ep. 286: My Year of Drinking Kanazawa
Tuesday Aug 15, 2023
Tuesday Aug 15, 2023
Bookbinding
Having finished My Year of Drinking Kanazawa I cased it in. Without a few mistakes and some successes. First, the spine is too large by a half a millimeter. Second, the space between the spine and the front and back covers is too small. It is 3mm when it should be about 5mm. While the book opens adequately it is not sincere like a book of short stories should be; it is mocking us.
I like the black cover and the white band toward the bottom that announces, on the front, the title. There’s nothing on the back. I considered putting my name on it but decided to be humble. Besides, it didn’t look good.
At the same time as I cased it My Year of Drinking Kanazawa I also cased in its companion piece: Sakate. This is much smaller (in page count) than MYDK. The book boards are necessarily thinner and cover itself nearly monotone. I experimented with a vertical band with the title in both Japanese (さかて) and English (Sakate, of course) while forgetting to include, possibly in a larger form the other Japanese ( 酒手). I slapped my name on a horizontal band on the back which is where I got the idea that it didn’t look good. Maybe a small horizontal band on the front?
Fiction
Both MYDK and Sakate feature Ishikawa saké and cityscapes. However, the reader, you, hopefully, doesn’t need to know about either to enjoy the story/plot/characters.
Whereas Sakate takes place in one bar with one bartender who encounters a variety of customers, MYDK takes place in 13 different bars, 14 different bartenders, and one customer (the unnamed narrator).
While Sakate was realistic, MYDK is sprinkled with magic and spookiness. Not all the stories have ghosts or strange coincidences; just enough to spice up the reading experience. I hope.
Secondly, while working on Soul of September (which was formerly called Heart of November) I had what you might call an epiphany. Parts of the novel were completely unnecessary: they didn’t move the plot along, they didn’t develop the main character in any unique way, they didn’t illustrate much at all for the reader. So I jettisoned them.
Then, I realized a couple of chapters could be reduced into one chapter while simultaneously reducing the wordiness, verbiage, and ploddiness of the story as a whole. So I combined them, reworded them, and enjoyed myself.
I dare not announce that Soul of September will be finished soon, but the major obstacles (as listed above) have been corrected. I’m hoping no major hiccups will appear in the next few chapters. But there probably will be. Fingers crossed, wood knocked on, and all that. I might change the name back to Heart of September.
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This week: Two related mystery novels: City of Cocks and Feeding Vicki’s Corpse.
A small coastal Oregon town has a murder on its hands. They turn to a retired Boston policeman to help them solve it. But he has a ghost following him; or so he thinks.
In City of Cocks, in the same coastal Oregon town, a disgraced businessman must rely on his wife and her drunk poet friend to save him from a life in prison.
The poet sees things that aren’t there, making him an unreliable witness.

Friday Aug 04, 2023
Ep. 285 Small Books and Writing
Friday Aug 04, 2023
Friday Aug 04, 2023
Bookbinding
I made a small book as practice in making small books. It’s about 75 pages and measures 100 mm x 75 mm which, for our Imperial users, is about 3.9 inches x 2.9 (3 15/16 by 2 61/64) inches. The cover is wrapped in red paper but there’s a chiyogami stripe down the front cover that doesn’t spread itself to the back cover. It has a bookmark so if you’ve lost your page, you can find it.
It’s blank so you can use it for whatever purposes you choose. It’s also smaller than the palm of my hand and I have small hands; or, according to everyone I know, small fingers.
Fiction
I’ve been writing on three or two things. First, Heart of November which I’ve decided to call Soul of September. I’m making the story clearer. For me, at least. Hopefully for the reader as well. Second, My Year of Drinking Kanazawa is finished except for a small bit. Next I will print it out, case it in, and make it available to those who wish to read it. Third, a detective novel that stemmed from one of the stories in My Year of Drinking Kanazawa. Detective/mystery novels are a technique of writing that I am not so confident in; I’m learning, though. I hope.
In this episode I will outline how I write. It will be quite simple. There are five basic steps I take in my writing practice.
- Dialog
- Action
- Emotion
- Dialog Tags
- Drama
I write the dialog first. After the dialog I bless the characters with some action. Meaning, if two people are talking, the reader can see them doing something. Pouring a drink, looking out a window, frowning.
After the action, I sprinkle some emotion on the characters. Sometimes the action and dialog match the emotion, sometimes it’s the opposite; whatever makes the story strong and the characters more believable.
After the emotional support is slapped in, I read it for the dialog tags. Those “...,” she said lines. If I set the story up properly, you won’t need the dialog tags. Also, if the characters have a distinct enough speaking voice, you won’t need the tags.“Y’all come uppa my house, now, hear?” vs “You’re welcome to come visit me at my place, if you want. All of you.”
Once the dialog is set, the action is proper, the emotion guaranteed, then I read the fiction for pacing, for dramatic affect, for speed of story. Once those are all set, I’m pretty much done. For the time being. Until I have other thoughts about plot, character, location, emotion, and everything else. I am no longer a One-Draft-I’m-Done kind of writer.
Sometimes I do all five things at the same time. Sometimes I space it out over the days, weeks, months, or, in the case of Soul September, years.
I hope this helps you with whatever you’re writing. What works for me might not necessarily help you, but I hope it does.

Monday Jul 10, 2023
Ep. 284: June Blank Journal Soul of September
Monday Jul 10, 2023
Monday Jul 10, 2023
Bookbinding
This week you have an A6 pocketbook blank journal, similar to the other A6 pocketbook blank journals I have been making but with the addition of two pages With Print!
The first page has the title of the book: Tedorigawa Bookmakers and the date: June 2023. The final page has the Tedorigawa Bookmakers logo. That’s it. The other pages, as you can probably guess from the title are blank.
The front is mostly green book cloth with two chiyogami-esque strips plus a red stripe that surrounds the entire book made of red book cloth. Yes, we are trying to use up as many leftovers, scraps, and bits that we can while still practicing the art of making books.
This book I like. It fits in your pocket (if you have any) and is very handy for drawing, doodles, notes, or any other activity you have in mind.
A previous book you can listen to about in Episode 281: How many mistakes can I make, I have made into a longish to-do list, interspersed with language tips I’ve picked up in Spanish and Japanese.
Included in that To-Do list is WIP Long Term Goals which includes finishing novels. Like The Dancer, The Sound of Fear, Heart of November, and, now, The Corpse at Oyama Shrine.
Fiction
Yes, I have started yet another novel The Corpse at Oyama Shrine but in my Work-in-Progress Long-Term Goals (soon to be shortened to WIPLTG, I suspect) we have Edit, Write, and Finish Heart of November. But also on that growing list is Edit, Print, and Case in Sakate and My Year of Drinking Kanazawa.
But what have I really been working on in the last week? Heart of November. And why have I been working on it?
Because several months ago I thought it was finished. I thought I wrote the final scene of the main character asking another high school student what Heart of Darkness was about since he lived much of it.
And I did. I did write the final chapter. But I sort of missed writing about five or eight chapters before the final chapter. In re-reading what I wrote, I discovered a lot of confusion; on my part, of course. So I rewrote what comes before the final chapter; expanded parts, made parts a separate chapter, deleted some parts. And rearranged parts in order to make the plot move faster.
Almost finally, I changed the title. Originally it was Eating November. Then it was Heart of November as a homage to the novel it resembles: Heart of Darkness. Now, I’m contemplating using Soul of September or Heart of September primarily because the action takes place in September after school starts in the US.
Finally, I started a Substack of Heart of November until I realized the book was not finished, so, once I finish it, I can restart the Substack.

Saturday Jun 17, 2023
Ep. 283: Two A6 Notebooks
Saturday Jun 17, 2023
Saturday Jun 17, 2023
Bookbinding
First, the new music for our intros and outros. It’s called Who’s Using Who by the Mini-Vandals and downloaded from YouTube Music. Last week I wrote it was probably downloaded from Pixabay. I was wrong; it’s from YouTube.
Here we have two blank notebooks who are the same only in size. A6 and 100 pages. the covers vary dramatically with one multi-colored and the other veering toward the monotone side of the color wheel.
The first, on the Front: the Matsushima (松島) one is coptic-bound with three different colors on the front and one basic color (green) on the back. Also on the front is part of a ticket from the Viennese tram system, a cut out from a takeaway menu showing the website of a Kanazawa bakery (Hug Mittens), and, of course, a large Matsushima rescued from a box or pamphlet extolling the virtues of a locally brewed saké. At least it’s brewed in Japan.
ver, On the Back: the back is not the same as the front. There is a thick hemp string (currently invisible) which was added for variety and spunk that was added after this photo was taken. It was added in the small holes you can see between the coptic binding threads which are blue (to match the blue of the front).
While the front of the book has three major colors (red, blue, green) the back has a green book cloth with two stripes of chiyogami-esque paper running down the left side of the back and a strip of green book cloth separating the chiyo-gami paper (gami being paper, I just said chiyo paper paper.)
This one, the Here! book, fits quite nicely into my hands and is superbly done, if I do say so myself.
The second A6 blank notebook is more subtle and subdued. It is cased in with a book cloth that was given to me by a store owner over 20 years ago. I wandered into his stationery shop and asked him if he had any book cloth. He didn’t know what book cloth was but decided this whitish-brown paper would fit the bill and shoved five or six sheets into my hands. He was right. They make excellent book cloths. This is the last of the sheets he gave me.
On the front cover are three details liberated from a business card for a local coffee shop. I have forgotten the name of the shop as I don’t drink coffee, but there’s a tiny map if you’re interested. The shop is in Kanazawa, if that helps.
The top shows a train station, the middle a highway, and the bottom, with the exuberant “Here!” plastered to it, the location of the coffee shop. With those three hints it’s practically impossible to find it, however.
The back is blank of decals or other adornments.
Fiction
Last podcast I allowed as how I was finished with My Year of Drinking Kanazawa. It is waiting for me to look at it again and put it up on Indesign to make it into a real book. Among those 13 short stories the narrator mentions, twice, reading a book by a friend of his called The Corpse At Oyama Shrine, a murder mystery solved by a private investigator and his henchmen and woman. He mentions it twice for when he started reading it and when he finished reading it three months later. So, I started to write it.
I got three or four chapters into it and thought, hmmm. How can this be improved and not a copy of Columbo or Sherlock Holmes? I started over, adding more intensity. Yes, before finishing either Heart of November, The Dancer, or The Sound of Fear, I’m embarking on another Journey.
In one short story, the narrator begins to tell the plot but the bartender asks a good question, why is the PI investigating and not letting the police do their work? This is a question I have asked myself as I begin re-thinking and rewriting those first few chapters.
Thus I have written another short story collection and ignored the other works in progress while starting a fourth work-in-progress. I need more hours in the day or less coffee or fewer ideas. Naaah. I’ll just plug along.
Thank you for reading this. Hope to see you again on
the next blog/podcast.

Saturday Jun 10, 2023
Ep. 282: Four Notebooks And Finished Fiction!
Saturday Jun 10, 2023
Saturday Jun 10, 2023
NewMusic: Who’s Using Who by the Mini Vandals
(probably found on Pixabay Music)
Bookbinding
In the last weeks or so four A5-sized blank notebooks were created. They were created using scraps I had left over from other projects in a failed attempt at reducing leftovers and scraps. Making books and covers creates more leftovers for future use. Sometimes.
They are all 100 pages and Coptic bound for two reasons. First, Coptic binding requires a lot less glue and I was, for some odd reason, trying to conserve on glue. Second, my printer isn’t working up to snuff so I’m not worrying about typography or printing anything which frees me up to experiment with different books. In the coming weeks (hopefully) I’ll tell you about a Small Book.
They didn’t take me too long to make. Maybe I made one every two or three days, time and real life permitting. And I only made one major mistake on one of the books.
One the last signature, of course, I sewed the Coptic bindings incorrectly and tried to save it; I failed. But the book is still useful as a blank notebook. It's just that the inside back cover is pitifully ugly.
The Green one at top is a paper I’ve had forever. And by forever I mean FOREVER. Well, at least 20 years. It’s a thickish paper with a great feel to it. It was also, if memory serves and I doubt that it does, fairly cheap. Why I kept it for 20+ years, I have no idea.
The Octopus one – purplish-blue-grey – with 88 (in Spanish) and the Red one with Save plus 97% UPF are the same book. The 88 is a Kanazawa restaurant serving, naturally, Spanish food. I stole the Save from the American Internal Revenue Service (IRS) which is pushing for citizens to make donations (taxes) online to Save paper. The UPF 50+ is from a hat.
Except for that one with the ugly inside back cover, the notebooks are good. I shipped them off to my wholesaler and she received them with, uh, trepidation and a touch of annoyance. But confident she can place them. Somewhere. Maybe.
Fiction
I had a thought. Bear with me now, it will take a bit to explain. My collection of short stories (My Year of Drinking Kanazawa) has 13 stories. While doing something completely different, I discovered that there were 15 Japanese emperors during the Edo era (1603 ~ 1868). I thought it would be interesting, and a second layer of intrigue, if the characters (all bar owners or tenders of said bars) were named after those emperors. I had to read about them to see if I could had a third layer of value to the stories; if the bartenders or the narrator was involved in something a emperor was involved in.
That didn’t happen. Plus someone said some conservative people might be upset that I had usurped an emperor’s name for a mere bartender. Fortunate. Changing the names, even with a Find Replace function would be tiring.
Despite all that, I changed three characters to three of the emperors’ during the Edo era not because there is any relationship between character and emperor but because I liked the names.
Also, I finished all the stories and the complete set is a mere 50+ pages with 13 short stories all taking place in a bar. With alcohol. But,
Finished! Yeah!
Want to read it? Let me know.

Thursday Jun 01, 2023
Ep. 281: How Many Mistakes Can I Make?
Thursday Jun 01, 2023
Thursday Jun 01, 2023
Bookbinding
How many mistakes can I make on one blank A6 notebook with 200 pages bound with perfect binding and still get a book I’m relatively pleased with? The short answer is: Lots!
• First and minor mistake: I counted 200 pages. I mistakenly assumed the book would have 200 pages. But I only counted sheets, not sides so it actually has 400! pages. Gads.
• Second visible mistake: The front book board and the back book board are not the same size. Off by a millimeter or two or half. But I can see it and the book doesn’t stand upright by itself.
• Third Really Big Mistake: The endpapers are Both! the wrong size and incorrectly attached. I attached the endpapers to the entire inside cover rather than leave a border. That made the part of the endpaper that attaches to the text block too big. Ugly even after I attempted to repair them.
But generally speaking I like the book. It has three different book covers on the front plus four attachments (Enjoy, a diagram, and kanji), and the spine is a book cloth from a previous book so it has part of the previous book’s title and part of my name on the front & back. And it’s a handy size, fits in the palm of my miniature hands.
Fiction
Exciting times in the writing factory! Working on My Year of Drinking Kanazawa I had a revelation and jumped on it. I completely rewrote the first story as it didn’t fit the structure of the other short stories. While working on it, I had an additional epiphany about two other stories and revised them. I believe I’m 90% through with the collection.
Two nexts on my agenda: ① I’ll finish off the last story which is longer and more convoluted than the others. ② I’ll let it fester for a while before looking at it again and try to improve it by eliminating Tell scenes with Show scenes and action verbs versus passive or boring verbs. And more descriptions of the weather in Kanazawa during the year.
Exciting times ahead!